Hey boss man your Cinders of Remnant story is absolutely out of order... I am totally not saying this after reading 20 chapters wondering why I was missing context not realizing I was basically reading out of order- totally ...
Eh boss? Dunno if you know this but your Cinders of Remnant story is in full reverse order and it looks funny from the standpoint of the story itself is being told backwards as the Soul of Cinder is dicking around telling his story.