I've got something BIG for you guys! I wrote something and now I'm wondering if I should turn it into a story or not. Wanna read it? let me know what you think about it, and I might make it an actual story or at least incorporate it into a new story.
Sunlight streams through the windows of the Monastery of Spinjitzu, illuminating the serene surroundings. __, a young ninja-in-training with __-colored hair reaching his shoulders and medium __ eyes, practices his Spinjitzu moves with focused intensity. His movements are fluid and graceful, a whirlwind of motion as he spins and leaps, his katanas a blur of silver.
Sensei Wu, an elderly and wise master with a flowing white beard, observes ___ with a gentle smile. "Excellent, __," he praises, his voice calm and soothing. "Your Spinjitzu is improving. But remember, true strength lies not just in power, but in balance and control."
___ bows respectfully. "Thank you, Sensei. I will strive for balance."
Sensei Wu nods. "Good. Now, I have a task for you. The city is experiencing a wave of unusual disturbances. I need you to investigate." __'s eyes widen. "But Sensei, I'm still in training. I'm not ready for a real mission." Sensei Wu smiles. "Every journey begins with a single step, __. This is your first step. Trust your instincts, use your senses, and most importantly, stay calm." __ nods, a sense of excitement and apprehension swirling within him. He is ready to prove himself, to show Sensei Wu that he is worthy of the honor of becoming a true ninja.
Well? What do you think?