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Hello @Mehr_writes! How have you been?

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          This book will not disappoint you. 
          Give a read. 
          Thank you! 

Hey everyone! I’ve decided to temporarily step away from this app until *September* to focus on my studies. As much as I love interacting here, I’ve realized I need to remove distractions (including endless scrolling and book readings ) to give my goals the attention they deserve.  
          
          I’ll miss posting and engaging with you all, but this break is necessary for me to stay on track. See you in September—wish me luck! ✨  

Hi  @Mehr_writes I have been reading your book zindagi ke beech mein and to be honest I can see the potential this book has 
          Like there are so many books out here that is about how two people met and got marriage and live happily ever after.
          
          But in your book, you are showing how even after 5 years of marriage, how things can be between husband and wife even when they have a child. In short your book is different from others so the storyline. There are so less book like this. So little suggestion if you like it take an action and if not that is ok. I as a reader what I felt about this book is just saying. You should rewrite this book with more clarity and also make changes in writing style to make it more interesting. And also if you are adult I would recommend you if you can then add detailed mature scenes between characters it will add more depth to the story like how they are portrayed in this book. They are distant but still connected through physical intimacy which is not enough in any marriage to keep going.
          
          And please don’t write everything in a single paragraph.
          
          Thank you