Hi guys I would love to engage with more readers and authors. I am a self published author of one book, written another and in the process of writing two more. Come say hi and have a read of my work would love your feed back.
How to make an author proud of their work.
A fellow author Marlene Tapscott who has published TUMBLEDOWN and EVERY PLACE SHOULD HAVE A TOUCH OF GREEN recently visited my wattpad pages to view the sample chapters for A TIME FOR ADVENTURE http://w.tt/1LoKDfl and ESCAPE http://w.tt/1RdLtIl
I would like to share with you the feed back she had given me.
About my writing.....
'I like the way you approach a story. You give it anticipation interest and pace. I like your planning. I have to say it has got my interest straight away. You have a way of dragging the reader into the story. Your description of things are like honey. They slide into place so easily.'
About my work in progress ESCAPE.....
'Mel, I found this interesting. I liked the anticipation which you build up. I identified with Charlie as a real human being through your depiction of family life and concerns surrounding Charlie. Your skills a describing scenes are vivid and this added another layer to your writing which dragged me in. I like your style very much'
Please if you can spare the time visit my wattpad pages and leave you own honest feedback.
You can find Marlene's work here http://www.amazon.co.uk/gp/aw/s//ref=mw_dp_a_s?ie=UTF8&i=books&k=Marlene+Tapscott