Melart Ciuper

@HaianhNguyen218 I'm fine, just lost the spark for Wattpad... Maybe I'll get it back one day but it's not now

@ DanteLCB  It will, thank you for your opinion 

@DanteLCB Right now at the moment is a golden opportunity as Keter has unlocked the Asiyah part we can delve into his mental state. Iirc Ayin made Keter in a sense to contain Asura, in a way we could see how Keter try to fight back Asura as more of his powers gets unsealed. Outburst of his real personality could happen with certain interactions and some of his personality could merge with Asura creating more of a dynamic in his social life.
            
            Re-reading this I realize this is more of a suggestion/theory than a feedback but I think I got my point through? Hopefully this is helpful.

@ DanteLCB  in what can I inprove?

@MelartCiuper i suggest you can add some flashback chapters about past y/n with the old L corp characters

@HaianhNguyen218 don't really know since I'm kinda stuck on this but I might focus more on developing the characters, I'm just debating if I want to add something new on day 21 or not

@MelartCiuper i see that we kinda in our first week so where will the story go till day 21 ?

@HaianhNguyen218 probably next week ill start writing again, I just wanna sit back and binge some animations

@HaianhNguyen218 yeah I'm fine i just got through my Mid term exams so I'm taking a break from anything reading related 

@ DanteLCB  maybe, it can still happen if I see how to fit beowulf,but foe now Midas is my priority for a possible sinner candidate for limbus company unless I change my mind.

@DanteLCB huh I thought you were talking about the Old English poem Beowulf, maybe they could be 2 different abnos under different names

@ DanteLCB  I mean, beowulf actually comes from a novel based on norse myth and I was thinking of making fixers based on Fairytales and not let it be exclusive to the abnos, Midas been one of them and I have plans for him when I reach limbus company