Melilemon

Haha....hah...I'm sorry

I sent an Angel to watch over you last night but it came back. I asked, "Why?" The Angel said, "Angels don't watch over other Angels." Twenty Angels are in your world, ten are sleeping in this world, nine of them are and one is reading this message. The universe has seen you struggling with some days, it's over a blessing is coming your way. If you believe in karma, send this to 14 friends, including me. If don't get one back, I'm not one of them :) As soon as you get five replies, someone you love will quietly surprise you...not joking! Pass this message on and don't ignore it. You are being tested. Karma is going to fix two big things tonight in your favor. If you believe in karma, drop everything and pass this on. Tomorrow will be the best day of your life, don't break this. Send this to 14 friends in 10 minutes, it's not that hard. Whoever else sends this to you, must care about you

Hi ! You seem to like yandere stories. I Know this is out of nowhere but I started to write one recently and I really need some opinion on it. 
          It would be helpful for me if give me your opinion about my story. Thank you.
          (It's ok if you don't want to .... no pressure)