Hope i'm not asking for much but if you decline I respect your decision. I've been writing for quite some time but I believe that I have gotten so much better in time! The only thing is this is my first to actually bring my stories to the outside world of my own thoughts. So with that being said, I was wondering if you could take a look at my story? Finding The One, it's a romance and action story. About a young girl who can't seem to find "love at first sight" being real. Her friends try to help, well mostly force love onto her, she doesn't like the outcome whatsoever. I would really be appreciative if you could just give me some feedback on it. Thank you so much for even acknowledging my message.