MelissaJeanMurphy

Ok guys!
          	The reworked version of The Story Of Us is up.
          	I hope y'all still like it, it's been redone in some ways but not alot.
          	Enjoy!!

chrissie86

your doing good with your book, but as always I have to critique you on your work though, lol always remember to capitalize names, I and God; and always, always proof read so you catch any little mistakes to correct them before you let your brilliant work out. other than those things you have captured me with your work. lol I think you could have used another inspiration aside from Dean Ambrose but to each his own I guess lol!!!

MelissaJeanMurphy

@chrissie86 Thank you, I try my hardest to capitalization everything I write if I need it.
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MelissaJeanMurphy

I am a book lover, I have read a few books from some of the writers and I must say they are amazing :)

MelissaJeanMurphy

@menluvgrace can u see Chapter 4?
            my app says I can't see it.
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