MelissaWebb000

I love all of my supporters and readers y'all keep me sane.love yall

shaderick_

I know I was supposed to have been did this but... I did read 'Aint nothing like a dark skinned girl'. Your story line is great. It should be a little more detailed and a little more dialogue. Just a few edits and you have a hit on your hands. Also just do like two P.O.Vs per chapter. It will save you time and it will help the reader become interested in the story. Like then pick the next chapter up with another persons P.O.V. But it was good.