Lyricscroll

Just wanted to say, i love the style of your fusion and iron, if i could however give a little advice, give some paragraphs more space unless you have to format the work in the current setting, helps give a smoother reading flow and can prevent misinterpretation due to lack of spacing.
          
          Otherwise, keep up the work. Loving the story and i hope Niles the best.

MellowHero03

@Lyricscroll Thank you so much for reading! I appreciate it :)
            Yeah spacing has been a challenge and I'm considering going over the fic once I have it finished and respace everything, though since I post on both AO3 and FFN I've followed the same format for all three. I'll keep your criticism in mind!
            
            Glad you're loving the story too!
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