Hi! Your books are great! Here are some tips, tricks, and suggestions for your stories!
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For titles, i would suggest to do something like this. Say you were writing a Steven Universe book. I would put your title, and put what the theme is in the summary of the book, or have the readers figure it out themselves. Or, you could put Steven Universe- ________ (the line is the title)
In the book, for parts when characters are thinking, use italics. And when you are using noises, put a star (*) before and after the effect. Also, when your characters are speaking, make a new paragraph and use lots of emotions, or more complicated words that have the same meaning as the word. Say you want to put sad. You could put emotional, disappointed, devastated, felt sympathy, and a lot more.
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Just remember these are just suggestions, there not meant to offend you. You don't have to use them, but the littlest thing can make the story much better. At least, that's what I've been told.
Thanks for writing some great books!
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