Memory

Thank you so much  You’re the first person to tell me that you enjoyed my story, and that truly means a lot to me. I’m currently in the editing phase and looking for honest feedback. Since you’ve read the whole thing, I wanted to ask if there’s anything you would have liked to see differently, or anything you think could be improved.
            
            Maybe you noticed something that I, as the author, might be blind to. Any thoughts you’re willing to share would be incredibly helpful! 

Thank you for your story! I get so immersed in stories I like that I forget to vote but I went back and rectified it as I really feel that your story has undeservingly little votes. Thank you again and I look forward to your next project!