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@Menace_  how cliche? And well you know there are alot of cliche stories on here sorry I actually like being cliche it just fits my personality im a cliche person  but thanks anyways like I said I enjoy you expressing your opinion but I felt like I had to make my point 

@savage_NoWebbie The story was good it just didn't fit my liking. Good story line and everything. I just honestly think (Teen fiction or not) that it should maybe be a little more realistic than you have it. I mean the story gradually turned very cliche in my opinion so I voiced. But that's my opinion.

just to address some of your questions....black ppl can be pale.....Mareoa's mom doesnt work at a farmer market she works personally for diamonds grabdma and thats why she pays her soo much....im sorry if my story isnt realistic like you want it to be...but thats why its called teen fiction hope you understand now...thanks for commenting :)

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