MentalTaleStory

Since I'm in charge of writing the Genocide story for MentalTale, why not give a preview~? >:3
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          	The halls were filled with the echoes of small boots tapping against the floor. Every door was shut and locked; every monster in hiding, save two. At the end of the hall, Frisk began to feel something…crawling around on her back. She couldn’t shake it off. As she turned the corner there was a soft chuckle.
          	
          	
          	
          	
          	
          	“heh heh heh. you’ve been busy, haven’t ya?” The short, shadowed figure at the left end of the T-intersection spoke.
          	
          	
          	“…”
          	
          	
          	“i expected that response. y’see, pal, you’ve been goin’ down a dangerous path. one that gets others hurt because you don’t wanna take the time to be human…”
          	
          	
          	 
          	
          	
          	The figure chuckled again and a bright blue glow came from their left eye. She took a step back, digging in her pockets to find a small syringe she had picked up earlier.
          	
          	
          	“i know i shouldn’t be one to judge since i’ve had my bad days too, but…there’s something i can’t understand about you. what made you think it was okay to hurt innocent monsters, innocent people? even when you knew they were weak and hadn’t done anything wrong you still hurt them…even…e-even when you knew they wanted you to be a better person, and felt you could if you tried.”
          	
          	
          	Frisk thought back to Papyrus, and how determined he was to make her treat everyone with kindness. She then began giggling and brandished her scalpel.

MentalTaleStory

Hope you guys like the preview ;3; -That_One_Roleplayer
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Killer_Squids

Hello there!
          When I found this AU, I got really excited. The idea is great, and it is already looking fabulous!!
          I sincerely hope this isn't abandoned, and if it isn't, is there anything I can do to help it go faster?
          I can write pretty well, and I'm not a terrible editor.
          Anyways, hope you see this soon,
          
          ~Squid

Killer_Squids

Of course! Thank you for the update!
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MentalTaleStory

@Killer_Squids 
            Hmm, you would have to ask DerpyBlueberrySans/That_One_Roleplayer if you'd want to help. Maybe send them a message on either of those accounts? 
            As for the story, I'll be able to update the Pacifist story more often once school starts in a few weeks. Summer can be very busy!
             
            --Beautiful-lunatic
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MentalTaleStory

Since I'm in charge of writing the Genocide story for MentalTale, why not give a preview~? >:3
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          The halls were filled with the echoes of small boots tapping against the floor. Every door was shut and locked; every monster in hiding, save two. At the end of the hall, Frisk began to feel something…crawling around on her back. She couldn’t shake it off. As she turned the corner there was a soft chuckle.
          
          
          
          
          
          “heh heh heh. you’ve been busy, haven’t ya?” The short, shadowed figure at the left end of the T-intersection spoke.
          
          
          “…”
          
          
          “i expected that response. y’see, pal, you’ve been goin’ down a dangerous path. one that gets others hurt because you don’t wanna take the time to be human…”
          
          
           
          
          
          The figure chuckled again and a bright blue glow came from their left eye. She took a step back, digging in her pockets to find a small syringe she had picked up earlier.
          
          
          “i know i shouldn’t be one to judge since i’ve had my bad days too, but…there’s something i can’t understand about you. what made you think it was okay to hurt innocent monsters, innocent people? even when you knew they were weak and hadn’t done anything wrong you still hurt them…even…e-even when you knew they wanted you to be a better person, and felt you could if you tried.”
          
          
          Frisk thought back to Papyrus, and how determined he was to make her treat everyone with kindness. She then began giggling and brandished her scalpel.

MentalTaleStory

Hope you guys like the preview ;3; -That_One_Roleplayer
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