HELLO EVERYONE!!! FINALLY a Secrets Awaken update! So, I had a major writers block at Chapter 23 (Dark Iblis), but I BROKE THROUGH IT!!! So some major changes I made to it:
1) Wendy O. Koopa is MUCH more in character now as a spoiled brat. Especially in her speech about violence not being the answer- it used to be because she suddenly turned kind because of Bowsay, but now it's because she's impatient to find her father (and I threw in another moment between her and Ludwig as well, further foreshadowing his arc).
2) The segment of the fanfic based on Mario & Luigi: Dream Team was originally pointless and had nothing to do with Bowsay or Pumpkin, it was just there to say "Hey let's reference another Mario game!" BUT NOW it has significance to Bowsay. Originally Luigi just fell asleep on the Pi'illo because he was tired, but now he falls asleep on it because his mind was corrupted, and Mario needs to go into his dreams to see what's up (and yes, Bowsay will play a part in it).
Because of the new ending of this chapter, Chapter 24 (Return to Luigi's Dreams) is about to go through a MAJOR rewrite/revamp, and it's gonna be SOOOOOO much better and more significant to the overall story than it currently is right now. So get ready, get excited, get pumped!
Anyways, here's the link to the new and improved Chapter 23 (Dark Iblis):
https://www.wattpad.com/102654470-the-secrets-awaken-a-mario-and-sonic-crossover
I hope you all are doing well, and if not, please remember you are still loved!
~MarioSonic24601<3