MerLynn

can i tell you an idea please? so when the time comes, bella's mum condition has worsen by a day her dad will have to make a difficult choice by putting mama hartley into a care home. now that will devastate bella which will result bella's emotion becoming unstable with anger, sadness and mostly rage but also her powers will get out of control along with the weather being affected by bella's mood and powers. so bella will take her anger and frustration out on everyone including her friends and probably edward as well. of course that petty, jealous bitch miriam will try to starts something with bella by doing or saying something to her which eventually will make bella snap. i think that bella already finds a way to make herself invisible again so she followed miriam into a stormy weather (caused by her powers and emotion) it's like something witthin her has taken over (i assuming it was the side effect with her bond with the water tentacle) bella want all charlotte/rikki/zac from mako mermaid mode out at miriam like all of the emotions she was holding in has been unleashed at miriam like a tsunami. eventually rikki and cleo stopped bella who then realise she went too far, then she broke down telling her friends about her home life and they gave bella a hug as a support also edward got even more suspious about the event.

1) i feel like zane is still a jackass cause i don't think he genuinly cares about bella, cleo and lewis, i just think he tolarates them because he's dating their friend rikki. i'm curious if there's gonna be an issue in rikki and zane's relationship?
          2) next chapt will be the full moon which means the water tentacle will strike again kidnapping bella, i wonder how the outcome of bella's being taken will play?
          3) to be honest?, i'm glad that the previous chapter was not bella crushing on will or thinking about him cause i think the more bella starts hanging out with her friends and family the less she thinks about will. i wonder what is the last straw for bella when she realize her "feelings" for will wasn't real and it's just an infatuation like either he will say or do something that turns bella off then she realised that her friends and edward was right all along about will. but bella kinda reminds me of julia the 50s mermaid?
          4) when bella's mum health gets worse, i feel like the emotions bella is holding in will be unstable like she will be, upset, angry and distress which will result her powers getting out control along with taking her frustration and her anger out on those around her i think the weather will go bad because of bella's mood and powers being unstable. she might go charlotte mode on miriam like while invisible bella used her powers on miriam in public maybe rikki and cleo tries to stop bella but bella said they don't know what she's been going through in her home life after bella is calm down she then tells her friends about her mum's condition also edward is even more suspious about the weather changing along with the incident?

1) the way coral bella told lewis, i quote "you don't belong here" it's giving me mako mermaid or natural born one vibes like ondina would have said something similar. also they way bella was eating that poor tuna along with appearance it's kinda reminds me of a siren.
          2) edward won't believe bella's cover story about her miraculous recovery, he will know something supernatural is going on because in his mind there's no way a human can recover quickly in one day like there's no traces of her physical illness along with not remembering about what she did or said. so eddie will know something's not right about bella and her friends he's gonna keep a close eye on them.
          3) Also, i'm excited for sophie coming into the picture cause she's gonna be miriam's worse nightmare especailly that miriam is somehow involved in will's live her brother. so something tells me that sophie will treat miriam worse than the sophie from the show who treated bella poorly but like i said before sophie might like bella and tolorate her presence cause in sophie's mind at least bella is not shallow, desperate or a jealous entitle girl but a down to earth and humble girl so i think sophie will get along with bella whereas she has major dislike to miriam and will do anything to make her life not easy.
          4) i think the aftermath of coral bella's action is that bella will be bold, sassy with her words she will call out people's BS without being afraid too along with putting someone (miriam) in their places.
          5) i think when bella feels comfortable to allow her friends into her home live, she might throw a mini party or gathering for close friends and family you know something fun really.
          6) can't wait for bella's potential to grow along with helping her friends to gain new powers as well.

heyy, no pressure just wanted to know when you might update "once in a blue moon"

damn, i want bella to do more damage to miriam as possible by saying more things to her or discreetly using her powers on miriam cause she was starting piss me off espacially calling bella a freak like how dare you or she to call my girl bella a freak cause she ain't no freak but extraordinary supernatural girl that can do amazing things that no other girls can do. Also sophie better hurry her ass up to get to gold coast to make miriam's life a living hell along with putting her in her places cause i know for sure that sophie in your story will treat miriam worse than sophie from the show.

Hello there
          How are you 
          
          Could I ask, if your comfortable/interested into doing a celebrity fanfiction but with a plot twist? 

I hunger for "Once in A Blue Moon" chapter. Feed me. :D

Not Bella telling Edward to take a chill pill along with her inner sassiness, is coming and I have a feeling once Bella is cured she might become bold with her opinion along with calling out people's BS

1) how will bella S feel about bella H especially that she's a powerful mermaid who happens to get edwards attention
          2) like i said before in my previous comment, how will the relationship with bella and edward work? cause she's a mortal mermaid while edward is immortal vampire who's body is frozen at the age of 17 or 18 year old. so Bella will be either making a potion to make her immortal or something or someone a higher power might turn her into an immortal mermaid?
          3) i kinda see bella adopting children having a diverse family?
          4) Also gold coast is the place where mermaids live so for a coven of vampires along with a pack of werewolves coming into the territory it's really alarming for the mermaids. so when eva visit bella maybe she told bella about other supernatural being existence along with them being at gold coast also eva warned bella about vampires cause they have tried to hunt mermaid for centuries because either of their blood or wanted to use them for their powers they wield so eva wants to protect bella along with her friends by warning them to stay clear away from the vamps along with wolves because of their bad temper?
          5) Also is bella from a semi-wealthy background cause i remember vividly from the show that her dad is hotel manager or something hence why bella along with her family moved around a lot? or i could be wrong.
          6) i see eva teaching bella new things about the supernatural world along with many other things?
          7) i see bella going ballistic on outsiders who tries to come into mako and the moonpool so bella hearing about the wolves coming into mako makes bella being protective of her home along with questioning the wolves what is there intention on mako so bella might be a bit hostile?

Hey, Will you be updating In this life soon?