MerLynn

Yes, I’ll be updating it this weekend. I won’t be writing in any of my other fanfics until I have it updated :) 

@Nzolamosi 1) what is the Quileute wolves business doing in mako island and potentally getting close to the moonpool location? cause they are wolf shifter who has no business into going to mako which is the hotspot for mermaids, so i see Bella being borderline protective of her home mako island along with being distrustful of the wolves because like i said what is their business doing in mako and do they have good intentions or not?
            2) So Bella S along with the Quileute wolves are coming to australia and if so there's gonna be some many drama including old rivalry between the cullens and the shifters, also does Bella S and wolves know that the cullen lives in gold coast australia?
            3) Like i said in my previous comment when bella S finds out about her ex boyfriend edward has his attention on a girl who not only shares the same name as her but also is way prettier than her along with being mermaid who has been part of the supernatural world since she was a child?
            4) how does using the crystal necklace powers work differently like the moonring? does bella H take her necklace off in order to use the crystal's powers or she keeps it on like that do use it?
            5) i know for sure that rosalie cullen won't be happy to see Bella S along with wolves moving into australia because she disliked bella s who was a danger magnet along with her cheated on edward with jacob and i wouldn't be surprised if rosalie rather prefers Bella H over Bella S cause at least bella h has a fun & sweet personality unlike bella s who has a bland persona?
            5) Gold coast is beginning to become a hotspot for supernatural beings and i wonder why?
            6) also does this fic take place in 2020s or something, if so what is bella's H fashion and hairstyles now cause i'm asumming that the fashion is different from the show?
            

1) Yeah, that’s what I was considering! I was also thinking that maybe some of the Quileute wolves would be there due to Mako Island. I’ve got a whole thing planned out for that if I decide to go through with it lol 
            2) I don’t think she’ll time off from school. If she does, it would only be for a day. But yeah, she’ll start trying to avoid Edward if/when he starts acting nosy LOL
            3) That would be neat!!
            4) I could see her doing that as well. I’m not sure if the necklace will become an actual moon ring, but I could see her using it in the same way
            5) Yes, she will likely sleep in the Moonpool quite a bit, and she will be very protective of it
            6) I’m still not sure about her secret room. I just have so much going on in the story already lol! But it’s definitely an idea 

@EpicAdventurer123 omgggg yayyy cant wait :))

Yes, I will be updating this week. The next chapter is almost complete :) 

Well, I hope you enjoy reading it!! :) <3

@Nzolamosi 1) Hmm… I’ll consider the ‘secret room’ thing. That would be interesting 
            
            2) Yes, he will lol!
            
            3) Yes, she will be protective of Mako :) She’ll definitely be more in touch with her ‘mermaid’ side 
            
            4) Yes, I don’t think I’ll be including that part in the season finale. Sophie isn’t even going to be a big part of this story. She’ll be in at some point, but I’m not going to make a big focus like in the show. Besides, Miriam is our ‘mean girl’ lol!
            
            5) Yes, you’re right :) She’s going to a wonderful leader when she gets out of her comfort zone. She still has quite a bit of character growth to do!
            
            6) I think she will keep it to herself for the most part. She may end up sharing it with Edward. They are going to become the best of friends here soon :)  Eventually, she may share it with the girls as well.
            
            7) That’s a good question! And one I can’t answer just yet without giving too much away :) 
            
            8) Yes, Bella H will find out about Bella S. I think she will be very supportive with Edward. He’s going to find comfort in her. I don’t think she’ll consider herself a replacement, especially because they are just going to be ‘friends’ at first. So, when it does turn into romance, she’ll know that his feelings are genuine. And yes, she will realize why he won’t call her by her first name. He will, eventually, refer to her as ‘Bella’ because soon, when he hears someone say ‘Bella’, it won’t be painful because the first thought that will pop into his mind will be Hartley, as opposed to Swan. :)

@Nzolamosi 1} bella's secret room part is where she decided to explore her house more and somehow she find a dent either in a wall or bookshelves it opens revealing a grotto similar to rita's from mako mermaid or you think whatever you want with the ideas?
            2) so edward will find bella speedy recovery along with not her remembering what she did while under the influence of coral suspicious?
            3) will be more connected with her supernatural (mermaid) side more than her human side because of her bonding with the water tentacles along being a guardian to protect mako from outsiders like when she sees someone getting close to the moonpool she will be borderline protective of mako and will try to use her powers to chase them away?
            4) Also at the season final episode, are you gonna change the part where sophie along a few people (i forgot their names) were at the caves and destroyed the moonpool powers which was supposed to help the girls recreate the tower of light cause i really hated that scene?
            5) i see bella being a natural born leader because she's gonna be cleo and rikki's mentor to teach everything from scratch along with teaching the future generations of merfolk, she's gonna be like nerissa in near the future she just needs to come out of her comfort zone to face challenges like the soon-to-be leader should.?
            6) do you think bella will share her jounal to her friends or will she keep that to herself?
            7) even if will does find out about bella's secret, will he keep it or try to expose her?
            8) will Bella find out about edwards ex girlfriend bella s who shares the same name as her and i how will she reacts? will she feel like she's a replacement, second choice or will connect the dot on that's why edward disliked her when they first met cause she shares the same name as his ex?

@Nzolamosi 2) Her coral mermaid form probably won’t be any worse than Emma’s. Emma looked pretty bad lol! 
            
            3) Yes, I do plan on writing a journal bonus scene in the future :) 
            
            4) I could absolutely see her trying to distance herself from him. We both know how pushy Edward can be when he’s curious about something LOL!!
            
            5) She won’t remember much, if anything. Which is really going to freak her out. She’ll remember not feeling quite like herself, but everything will be hazy
            
            6) I could see that happening! I’m not sure yet :) 
            
            7) Yes, Bella will be a good mentor to the other girls regarding their powers. Miss Chatham always freaked me out a little lol! 
            
            8) That’s an interesting idea! But I’m not sure how her secret room could have came to be. 

I might be! The next chapter is almost finished. I just have to go back and edit it. 

Hahaha!! :D The next chapter will be a good one! I’m hoping to have it updated by this weekend 

@Nzolamosi I'll be interested to see the bonus scene of Bella creating a journal about her supernatural journey from when she was 9 years old to 17 or 18 years old, I see that her journal would become thicker throughout the years of documenting everything. At first bella doesn't share her journal with her friends at first because she feels hesitant that they might either lose it or get into the wrong hand or she created that journal since she was nine years old and to her, it's very sacred but maybe in time she will try to share her sacred journal to her friends but for now she's keeping it for herself until she feels like she's ready to share it.

@Nzolamosi She might! That would be a good idea. If the details of it aren’t included in my story (because there’s so much going on in it already), I may add an extra “bonus chapter” for those that would be interested in it! 

@Nzolamosi also will Bella H create her own journal about making potions, spells, ingredients, how to be immune to moonspell, developing new powers, learn history about Mako along with the moonpool around the world, like in Mako mermaids when they dive deeper into things?

So, I don't get why Bella S who is now in her late 30s will be bothered by Bella H for having Edward's attention. She might become jealous of Bella H cause not only is she prettier than her but also she has been part of the supernatural world since she was 9 years old so Bella S might feel some type of way about Bella H cause she wishes that she were in her shoes.
            1) also did bella S cheated on Edward with Jacob?
            2) If Bella S tries to get close to edward it won't work because she's in her 30s and even though Edward is spiritually older bella S is around a 100 he's still stuck in the body of an 18-year-old.

@Nzolamosi I think she’d be in her late thirties

@Nzolamosi how old would Bella s be cause edward said it has been decades since their breakup?

@Nzolamosi Possibly :) I’m not sure yet

@Nzolamosi so bella might be in the moonpool when Cleo, Rikki and Lewis tried to cure her?

LOL I think she might be!