Dear author ,
I am no intentions of sounding rude but I would suggest you too change your style of writing the novels or fanfictions.
I would suggest you to leave one line after each paragraph and dialogue and describe the situations in a better and clear way.
I also suggest you to correct your spelling and grammar you can use grammarly keyboard it will help you a lot with your books.
I think you should go to my account and check best the reading list: BTS fantasy stories, you are going to find a fan fiction named "Reborn" you would refer that or any other stories in my reading list that could help you in anyways in the betterment of your books.
I hope I didn't ofend you but I just wanted to help you in anyway I can and there is one more thing that you do could do in your stories is that try to make them longer what you mean by that is try to make a longer storie with more details in them.
I didn't mean to offend you in anyway but just wanted to help in getting more viewers, votes, and followers.
I hope this would have helped you and I really suggest you to use grammarly because that would help you in choosing better words like in my comment I told you it's not bomb stopper but bomb diffuser and just like that it would help you in many other ways in and making your writing skills even better.
