@MerissaParris-Aaron ur welcome and it's okie doke... =)....
I haven't fully read it out as yet, seeing as it 16 pages.. but i liked that she just went up to him and just went all psycho... and he mooned the teacher! well, his phone fell, but still! I seriously laughed at that part... when i've finished i'll comment better.. rite now i have to fin a little presentation thingy for Chinua Achebe's Things Fall Apart... and i'm yet to fin the book.. YAY me! -_-
and don't worry about feed back..it'll come! =)... btw if u add a description and a book cover... it'll make the story more attractive to readers! =)... I'll make one for u, if u want... nothing professional, just a lil sum sum...;p...
Oh, and if u read my story, please be noted that my grammar isn't as immaculate as urs... sorry!