@Mermaid1871 Honestly? I don’t think I could pick out one bit from any chapter you have written… But I really have to give you credit for how you have developed Derek’s character throughout Keeper. He is still Derek Hale but you have let us see every side of him that we never got in the series: The vulnerability, the hurt, the loving and nurturing… And I was not expecting the plot with him essentially being 100% human! You have poured your heart and soul into this storyline ❤️