MeskhiM

Guys, sorry for the late updates on “Crimson Accord” . I just have a busy schedule at the university . Love you all~~~

P_R_E_Y_E

Crimson Vice, a short lovely read. I love that the characters were not like the usual buff and twink duo.
          I noticed that it was actually a second book. 
          
          The pace was nice, albeit a bit rushed. Some scenes were not given the time to bloom in the way that would have kept readers grounded. 
          
          It started off with a rather unsettling or should I say unusual pace. I do believe that love or desire is a very complex emotion. It can start abruptly between friends, strangers or just people you've met with only once. 
          
          It needed a build up. I strongly believe that if you had at least written a few scenes of Isaac just watching from a distance, or even confessing that he had, since long, had a crush on Daiki, considering the fact that the two had been in the university for a while, it would have been a nice build up to the scene in the locker room at the beginning of the novella. 
          
          With the grabbing, sudden pour of lust, love, obsession and possession, it felt off. I'm not saying it was not a good read. I enjoyed it. 
          
          I'm just saying that it'd be so nice if you actually consider building up. 
          
          What captivated Isaac?? 
          
          Well, I will try to read the first book. Perhaps, the answer might be there. You did say to read it, so as to understand some things.

P_R_E_Y_E

And the storyline...
            
            The tension, the suspense, the mind games, the tests of a typical thriller×romance book is missing. 
            
            I'll just guess that you're not a fan of writing too much into action filled nonsense. But, do consider writing it. You don't have to go in deep. 
            
            The 'three days later, something happened', 'two months later, something happened' need to be explained if you want to have a solid setting. 
            
            Again, you don't have to go in too deep. I know that it might have felt like the scenes were unnecessary, but you can build the characters with them. 
            
            In these scenes, their love, trust and loyalty could have been tested. Like the threat that Daiki's parents were involved in Isaac's mother's death. I was expecting a test. 
            
            It's alright. I loved it. It was a short, nice and wholesome read. Isaac was such a mood. 
            
            Thank you for writing this masterpiece. 
            Don't bother about my comments too much. At the end of the day, they are just opinions. 
            
             Peace. ♡
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MeskhiM

Hey again! I wanted to share an update—I’ve unpublished all my previous works except for the Crimson Series. Looking back, I realized they had grammar issues and plot inconsistencies that I overlooked when I was younger and less experienced.
          
          Now, I’m fully dedicated to writing in dark genres, including dark romance, dark fantasy romance, and dark historical romance. The Crimson Series currently has two books out, and I’m working on the third. While each book follows a different couple, they’re all connected, so I recommend reading them in order to fully understand the characters and their dynamics.
          
          Thank you for your support—I appreciate you all!~~

MeskhiM

          Hi guys!~
          
          First of all, I’ve decided to take down the Santini series. The storyline was too complicated, the grammar was inconsistent, and overall, it reflected my inexperience at the time.
          
          I’m also considering taking down the Wylde series, but I haven’t made a final decision yet.
          
          As for Blood My Feathers, my first fantasy book, it’s currently on hold. However, I’m determined to get back to it eventually.
          
          He Is A Blondie is my first MM romance, but I’m unsure if I’ll revisit it in the future.
          
          Now, about the Marchetti Duet. I’ve decided not to take it down. Instead, I’ll be rewriting the books to correct grammar issues and fix any plot holes.
          
          Finally, the Crimson Dark Romance Trilogy is by far my favorite project. The first book, Crimson Sonnets, is officially complete, and I absolutely love every chapter of it.
          
          I’m currently working on the second book, Crimson Vice, which is also my second MM dark romance. I’ve developed a huge emotional connection to the characters, and this story feels deeply personal to me.
          
          There will also be a third book, Crimson Accord, which I plan to release shortly after finishing Crimson Vice!
          
          Thank you so much for supporting me through this journey! ~