Mhagoblin

I am challenging myself!! I will try and write a fanfic every month! Please stay tuned for more content.

saradautchiha36

Hi 
          
          I'm just asking for your opinion on this one cuz I'm putting lots of efforts on it yet I'm barely getting any views.
          
          It's kinda frustrating.
          
          What do you think? Should i continue or stop.
          
          Thank<3
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/355922424?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=saradautchiha36

Mhagoblin

@saradautchiha36 Hello, it seems like you already have your plot set, I think you should world build first before trying to introduce characters or give a slight setting in the beginning of your chapter for example you could say ' in the land of (....) (this character is doing this )'. or something of the sort. You can also space your paragraphs differently unless the way you have them is a stylistic choice. What I usually do is I make a good, structured paragraph which is like five to six sentences and then I indent and start a new paragraph it just makes it easier to read for the reader. With the issue of engagement, you honestly have to have a consistent schedule for when you update or just update frequently. Wattpad isn't the same as before and not that many people use it anymore, so it is really frustrating when people don't read what you write. 
            
            Never stop writing all things get better with practice I wish you the best in your writing journey!
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