So far, I have been enjoying reading the book about Elijah and Penelope. I love how you slip Penelope into SaB's posted videos without losing the plot and how she seems to fit in with the others effortlessly. I will say I am satisfied with the way you wrote the story and its overall outcome. However, there are some tiny details that bother me which is the lack of punctuation and grammar. I am not saying that it's a big problem, but it does in fact bother me a little. That's all I have to say. Keep up the good work and you will improve! Sincerely, a reader.
