MichaelP05
NEW CHAPTER IS OUT!!!
MichaelP05
MichaelP05
YOOO!! NEXT CHAPTER IS HERE!! HOPE YOU ENJOY!!
MichaelP05
HELLO Y'ALL!! TODAY IS MY BIRTHDAY SO I AM UPDATING MY BOOK WITH A NEW CHAPTER!! HOPE YOU ENJOY IT!!
UNKNOWNONESTUDIO
Hey there! Can you please read and write a comment on it.
https://www.wattpad.com/story/394167709?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=UNKNOWNONESTUDIO
MichaelP05
YET ANOTHER CHAPTER IS OUT Y'ALL!!!!
MichaelP05
NEW CHAPTER IS OUT!! GO AND CHECK IT OUT!!
MichaelP05
HEY THERE!! I'M HAPPY TO INFORM YOU THAT CHAPTER 17 HAS JUST BEEN RELEASED!! HOPE YOU GUYS ENJOY IT ☺️
HarryPantelidis
This text offers a dynamic and emotionally charged narrative, blending action, fantasy, and psychological depth. The scene where Nicholas hears for the first time that someone is proud of him is particularly touching and adds a layer of human sensitivity to his character. The use of magic and combat tactics demonstrates a good effort in creating a world with its own logic and unique elements.
However, there are some areas that could be improved. The characters Eldrin and Hunter come across as somewhat one-dimensional, driven primarily by jealousy and ambition. Developing their motivations further could make them more complex and relatable. Additionally, the pacing of the narrative could be smoother, as some scenes feel rushed while others are extended more than necessary.
Overall, this is a text with potential, laying the groundwork for an engaging story. With a bit more attention to character development and narrative flow, it could become even more appealing to readers.
Yes, to the future of the writer!
MichaelP05
@HarryPantelidis It makes me very happy that so far you have enjoyed my book. And I wholeheartedly appreciate the fact that you took time to talk to me about it. There are indeed a few characters who are underdeveloped and seem a bit one-dimensional. However, there own development will come in due time, as the story progresses, especially when more of their origins are revealed. Expecting all the characters to be analyzed in great detail, this early in the story, is not something I'll do. After all, I do plan to create more than just one book. Again, thank you for your kind words ! And stay tuned for more updates!!
MYSTORIESTUDIO
Hey there,can you read one of my novels.
MichaelP05
I've finally updated a new chapter!! Probably the longest one.