Michaelkingss

@charleel I like it so far can't wait for the next bit and if you need help editing it i would love to help

@charleel no problem I'll read it and let you know

@charleel Could you read my tale and evaluate? I'm sorry for my English, I'm brazilian. Thanks you!!

Of course! Don't worry, I'm originally from Canada so i know how it is with bad English.

@NightRaven15 Could you read my tale and evaluate? I'm sorry for my English, I'm brazilian. Thanks you!!

@RobertCarroll3 of course! (needed something to read) I'll get to it afterschool

@RobertCarroll3 Could you read my tale and evaluate? I'm sorry for my English, I'm brazilian. Thanks you!!