MichelleEB9
Sooooo um how’s everyone doing,good that’s great,um so I’m was just gonna ask like what’s your guys opinion on this story
Like what do you think I can improve on?
Dakari_0022
@MichelleEB9 hmmm The story overall was just amazing, i could tell exactly what you were going for and i loved the comedy smm but the only thing that i could see improvement on is the typos but other than that 10/10