Michelleabdou

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@LElover okay thank you so much, I really needed some feed back! 

@Michelleabdouu hey, I just read your book. It's a nice story, I think it will work! Ido think the beginning is a little abrupt. Maybe you could start with a short scene and then during that scene explain her life?

@LElover thank you so much 

@Michelleabdouu sure! I'll read it

@FeliceMuk Ya for sure!

go take a look at my story :)

@LElover hey can you check out my story and tell me how it is so far?:/