Mickey_28

hey I just read through your story and its really good and I cant wait for the next chapter x and I was just wondering if you could have a look at mine to say what I would need improving on or anything xx thanks●●

hey thanks for the follow back :)

Haha I'm glad you love it and I will update but I just need help / ideas @Queen_Elsa_Snowy 

It's ok don't worry about it . I was thinking I can put that Idea later if that's ok @izzyyy2002 

I feel bad for asking for help again but can you help me ? All I have is that hiccup couldn't go to sleep because of yesterday ( anna and Kristoff kissing ) he's still laying down until toothless walks in and licks him then they go flying and do tricks then his dad calls him since there's a meeting and toothless goes home all sad . Once hiccup gets there and no ones there so he starts drawing and the drawing is about Anna when they first met . That's all I have . @izzyyy2002 

Because your helping me ..... And does it matter if it's a short chapter ? @izzyyy2002 

Ok thank you @izzyyy2002 

What do you think ? @izzyyy2002 

That's great , but can I change just one part ? Where hiccup walks in and sees Kristoff kissing Anna but he takes it the wrong way . Either way he goes and beats up Kristoff and in Anna pov she's thinking that she does love him because he saved her but she realized he took it the wrong way when he just gets up and walks away and goes home ..... Or no? @izzyyy2002