Mickie_Lewis
This is a story currently being edited from what I had once posted before, I look forward to finishing it and am very glad I get to share it with every one of you! https://www.wattpad.com/story/154874144
Mickie_Lewis
@Un7inished Hi! Sorry, not meaning to be rude, but I just wanted to point at that it was purposefully done that way- his thought's are messy in the beginning as he's quickly getting them all into writing, and he's assuring the reader future paragraphs would be better done in a way :) Sorry it was confusing <3 Also thanks so much! I'll try to finish the next soon, I'm glad you're interested <3
Un7inished
I know ur character said they know what paragraphs are but u can show that in his writing he’s terrible at writing paragraphs but in his thoughts there should be paragraphs in the right places. Just a suggestion feel free to take it or not. The first chapter was good I’m excited to see where it goes next