Thank you so much for your nice comment on my story!
I share your opinion on how the beginning of a story sets the pace for the story and so I did work quite hard to make the beginning feel how I would like the rest of the story to feel.
I will update the story as often as I can with a new chapter. The chapters are not particularly long but there will be a lot of them. Chapter two will be out very soon.
Please keep feedback coming and any things you might like to see happen.
It's very nice to see another Starcaft fan :)
You like Starcaft and Halo do you? They are two of my favorite games EVER!!!
If you are interested I have just written a Starcaft fanfiction and would love some feedback on it. I also have to more fanfictions on their way.