Mickyandminnie

@Future_Rick_Roirdan 
          	I know right! I actually like the original movie better than the new one but still sooooo good! Anne totally deserved that oscar.

DeborahMitton

Murders in the Hill was a good start for a story.  Your verb tenses need work as well as punctuation and spelling - sorry.  Maybe you wrote it on your ipod? Examples: road sh be rode, women sh be woman, ill sh be I'll, iy sh be it.
          Just read your work over again and do some editing.