Midaskisser
https://open.spotify.com/playlist/1htKm71YEK7k3hs4zeUu2W?si=7Fw1ZUNKTVuNIvf2bfwQOg&dd=1 marigold playlist if you want some background music ☺️ songs may or may not be foreshadowing some chapterssss
Midaskisser
Dylan_I_Guess
Okay so the world we knew has very nice writing, though if I had any creative criticism, the transition between chapters is non existent, and the translation between Midas talking to Tina and then talking to Jules is a bit confusing. Though I don’t think the transitioning really matters if it’s just a one shot, also you write very nice :)
Dylan_I_Guess
If you need help with transitions I know a guy who can help, and that guy is me. But it’s good, you got potentional
Midaskisser
@Dylan_I_Guess yeaaah i’ve never been great at transitions but im working on it :] also the part where he talks to jules is a flashback ^^ its like kinda supposed to be confusing ina sense
Midaskisser
Part two out yay
stoopidkat
hey shithead (Jojo)
Midaskisser
Wdy think of like wholesome father daughter bonding content?? idk the idea of midas being a good father (before spy stuff) to jules is an itch i GOTTA scratch so would yall be interestsd in reading allat
R4yl3yy
i found youu....