MidnightCraver13

okay, guys! so I realize that there is a problem with chapter thirteen in my book because I do have another language being spoken in that chapter and I feel like it would take away from the story to have the english and Deutsch text right next to each other. its just something that bothers me so I will post the link to the full chapter In english here in the convo tab.  
          	
          	https://docs.google.com/document/d/1F6M9vYgKA69G7rsn-lu9xC6knnfApa15089nmZunRN0/edit?usp=sharing

MidnightCraver13

okay, guys! so I realize that there is a problem with chapter thirteen in my book because I do have another language being spoken in that chapter and I feel like it would take away from the story to have the english and Deutsch text right next to each other. its just something that bothers me so I will post the link to the full chapter In english here in the convo tab.  
          
          https://docs.google.com/document/d/1F6M9vYgKA69G7rsn-lu9xC6knnfApa15089nmZunRN0/edit?usp=sharing

faded-daydreams

Thanks for the follow!!

MidnightCraver13

You’re very welcome bestie!! And thank you for the follow as well. I only have one book up at the moment but I do hope that you take the time to read and enjoy it as much as I do! And y feed back works as well and thank you for such an amazing assortment of books on your page
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cxdevxmpiire

Does you location happen to be a for KING & COUNTRY reference?

MidnightCraver13

And it’s funny cause I posted a new chapter today as well
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MidnightCraver13

Maybe…
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MidnightCraver13

No comment…
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cxdevxmpiire

The username>>>>>

cxdevxmpiire

@MidnightCraver13 Well you just got one!
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MidnightCraver13

Also I love your story so far!!! I can’t wait for the next update
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MidnightCraver13

Hey bestie!!! How have you been!!! What have you been up to
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cxdevxmpiire

YOUR PROFILE!!! I AM DYING!!!!!! I LOVE IT SO MUCH!!!!!

MidnightCraver13

@craver_control are you sure? I have two tickets for New Orleans now
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cxdevxmpiire

@MidnightCraver13 It's okay, I'll have my mom buy me tickets one day when she finds them for cheap
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MidnightCraver13

@craver_control I may have a way to get you to a Taylor swift show but don’t hold me to that yet
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MidnightCraver13

A new book is live! I’m testing the water with my writing any feedback tips or even Ideas are welcoming and much appreciated

A_R_Mitchell

@MidnightCraver13 I also have a free blog on Substack for writing tips. I do trauma education healing and awareness there - but its all with writers in mind. You can start here: https://chronicwriter.substack.com/s/dna-of-story Or here: https://chronicwriter.substack.com/s/storytelling-through-trauma
            I have plans to post some of this content to my Wattpad page, so if you want to give me a follow for more info like this, that'd be great.
            Thanks for reaching out.
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A_R_Mitchell

@MidnightCraver13 - What I ended up doing in Red Trouble and The Mist Walker Trilogy was: 
            Location
            Time
            Announcement of Time Gap
            Character point of View
            
            It ended up reading something like this:
            Winslow Arizona
            Evening
            1947 (Two Years After the End of World War II)
            Hawk Morrison
            
            As long as you stay in a consistent format through your entire novel, people will get used to it.
            You can see how I handled this with my novels on my Amazon page. https://www.amazon.com/stores/A.-R.-Mitchell/author/B01ID1ND1U?ref=dbs_a_def_rwt_bibl_vu00_i0&isDramIntegrated=true&shoppingPortalEnabled=true
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A_R_Mitchell

@MidnightCraver13 - time skips without writing "time-skip"
            Think about how your favorite movies handle this. Its usually on the screen with a time, year, date... and all the info. Vantage Point with Dennis Quaid might be something you want to watch for ideas. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Vantage_Point_(film)
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