Ato0mix_x
I just finished reading 'Her only attempt'. It did take me a little while to complete the story because i wanted to be in right mindset to absorb what you have written.
And me saying that its a masterpiece would be downplaying how deeply impactful the story was.
The way raghav and ananya communicate will always be a benchmark for me, specially how they hold their silences. Another remarkable feature i noticed was how they didn't try to define things, they lived things, let them take their own shape without actively working on it.
It made me self-reflect a lot, and dare i say im not mature enough or brave enough to do that even when I crave it ardently. The stillness if letting things (and relationships) find their own direction.
Its so calming to see people exactly where you wish to be emotionally and mentally. Its admirable and inspiring.
One more aspect in the story, which is often less represented and wrongly if it is, the arc of ' she fell first' or 'she made him better'. Here, ananya simply existed, and raghav realised how her existence, merely as a light down the hall, can leave so huge impression on him. Also, how you conveyed the entire dynamic of seeing somebody and being seen. It's.. I have no words for this one. It felt as if you dived into my head and wrote exactly what i hope from my (yet nonexistent) relationship.
Thankyou for writing this wonderful narration of life. It will forever be a story i come back to again and again to experience that fiction is not as fictional as we make it.
May you always find happiness in writing, and may you get all the aspirations you write about.
You deserve it, and more.❤️
MidnightSnacker12
@Ato0mix_x may be it is just one aspect of ideal marraige that i imagine which may be rare in the real world but you can immerse yourself in these stories
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Ato0mix_x
@MidnightSnacker12 ❤️❤️ I would really like to hear more about your inspirations for this story!!
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