'ello, names Shade. Obviously... I was gonna say your not a bad writer, I'm just not one to go out me way to like, or vote, on something. Haha, but yeah, your a great writer. I admit, you book Starfall isn't something I'd personally be interested in, but everything is worded perfectly. Keep writing, Midnight. You could probably get somewhere great, if you already haven't! It's truly amazing. I wish you a nice day, :)