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I have started to read the second chapter of “Phoenix Rising”, and I have a good suggestion of a comeback you can use:
“Does your ass ever get jealous of the amount of shit that falls out of your mouth?”
Btw, love the story so far!!! And there are a few typos and grammar errors, but I could care less about that. Don’t give up on the story, and keep up the good work!!!