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Hi there. You are probably the only person whose given me a critique on my writing that claims I was all over the place with my work...erm..I'm a new writer and I am learning my way through things and I really do need to understand my flow, its something I've always wanted to properly work on considering English isn't my first language. Anyway, is there any suggestions you have to make it better??