whattapickle

Hi there. You are probably the only person whose given me a critique on my writing that claims I was all over the place with my work...erm..I'm a new writer and I am learning my way through things and I really do need to understand my flow, its something I've always wanted to properly work on considering English isn't my first language. Anyway, is there any suggestions you have to make it better??

MayFreighter

Hi,
          Thank you very much for the follow. I really appreciate it, so feel free to strike up a conversation if you want to.
          
          Stay awesome,
          ~MF~

Midnightwonderer

@MayFreighter hahaa...just complmenting your skill to make us all imagine an other world^^
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MayFreighter

@Midnightwonderer Thank you, I am very happy that I could take you away from reality even for a little while.
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Midnightwonderer

@MayFreighter aww that's so sweet. your work really took me back its so detailed and carefully carved. you are an awesome writer ^^
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