Miguel De La Cruz

not sure if im going to keep writing or if i should continue. i think my most promising story is elisia, since all the other ones id have to completely rewrite if i chose to continue them

Accidentally published an unfinished version of chapter five of "Elisia Emerson: Goddess of the Damned" and I do not know how to unpublish, but if you do read it please dont judge it too harshly... it wasnt the finished product and i havent been able to convey the scene exactly as I imagined it.

i have half of the next chapter done, but i only received 5 reads on my latest chapter. is it because its bad or because im not more active on the site? the next chapter is geared more towards action and revelations, no spoilers tho.

Finished chapter four of "Elisia Emerson: Goddess of the Damned".  I hope yall like it, if you have any critiques you are more than welcome to share them. 
          
          However, I'm not great with grammar, and the structure I used when writing is purposely short. This makes the story easily digestible, thus intimidating new readers. I believe shorter paragraphs are easier to read for those who aren't avid readers.

I'm going to be writing a little more often, but i still have some stuff to do. Will release new chapters and finish the latest one since i left it unfinished. It wasnt for a cliff hanger effect, i was sleepy since i had been up all night and wrote the chapter like it was a one shot. Its not perfect, but its not bad. Still have some hints to drop in order to make a reveal later.

Cool good stuff. Best of luck with developing your work!

I know some of you dont really read my stuff, but id like your opinions.
          
          I have four books im writing and got inspired to write another.. I can tackle five books but progressing the others will take longer. 
          
          however, it is easier to keep the plots fresher in my mind if I multitask. if I focus on one, then I may forget details of the others..

if you like my cover for: A Knight In The Apocalypse
          
          check out JLVice, she's really good at it, and has 3 works on the site worth reading :)

xoxJustBeingMexox is a very good cover artist is you're looking for one.
          
          

Meowcow21 has made the cover for:
          
          A Songstress Lore of Lies
          
          check her out, if youre interested in covers or her two books:
          
          Staying Positive
          
          First Impressions
          
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          very satisfied with my cover.