PanzerVor621
Btw I just got a notification right after I gave my suggestions in a comment on the first chapter of your Zootopia story. Lol I feel like I can't just to late. But I can help your rewrite/revise some of the chapters. Because that last chapter I looked at was exactly what you don't want to do. Making Nick and Judy your adoptive parents is one of the most self insert things you can do.
