MikeDePaoli

I happen to be home today (last day of a sort-of vacation) so thought I would post another chapter of "Future Rachel Problem." I'll return to my regular schedule on Saturday.
          	
          	In Chapter 51, Rachel's stuck in the past, and when Sam rushes to her aid, he reveals some bad news...
          	
          	https://www.wattpad.com/story/354706619-future-rachel-problem-a-novel-of-the-terribly

MikeDePaoli

I happen to be home today (last day of a sort-of vacation) so thought I would post another chapter of "Future Rachel Problem." I'll return to my regular schedule on Saturday.
          
          In Chapter 51, Rachel's stuck in the past, and when Sam rushes to her aid, he reveals some bad news...
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/354706619-future-rachel-problem-a-novel-of-the-terribly

MikeDePaoli

I happen to be home today (for most of you it will be Wednesday morning when I post), so I thought I'd release another chapter of "Future Rachel Problem." I'll go back to my regular schedule on Saturday.
          
          In Chapter 49, Lauren learns more about what happened to her quarry, and discovers she needs to find another way home...
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/354706619-future-rachel-problem-a-novel-of-the-terribly

JESSICAc28

@Mike, obrigada pelo comentário! 
            
            Passei para conhecer sua história e gostei bastante da leitura. A Lauren me chamou atenção por parecer uma personagem muito humana e dedicada à família. Gostei também da forma como você mostra as preocupações dela com Sarah Jane, porque deixa a cena muito real e fácil de imaginar.
            
            Sarah Jane também é uma personagem muito fofa e traz momentos que deixam a história mais leve e envolvente. Sua escrita é agradável e os personagens parecem ter personalidade própria.
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