NerdGuy00

That last chapter was really good and I have a strong feeling that your either having momo or mina as the love interest (still hoping it's gonna be Mei but not trying to force anything) besides that I really like how your writing Peter as a bit of a dick because 1. It's comic accurate to the original comics 2. He should be acting like he's better than 1a because quite frankly he is and 3. Peter shouldn't be the perfect hero not until post symbiote at least in my opinion because the symbiote brings the worst out of Peter and after the symbiote Peter does become a better person overall this story is going amazing so far

MikesCrackFics

Thank you!!!! I don’t exactly have anything concrete for romance at the moment because I seriously think 90% of the girls in MHA who are around his age would work amazingly paired with him lol. Totally agree with the points you made. I like my Peter with an attitude to start off
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CatalysVesp

I love this MHA Spider Man story it's so refreshing to see a version of peter acting like his ditko counterpart super comic accurate ans refreshing, and it leaves rooms for a lot of charecter developtment for him and class 1a bond with him to develop, God this story would be so good if there's a bonding moment between peter and ochako because they are very similar in their charecters in some places, like them becoming heroes to help their family out (kinda, because peter takes picture of himself as spider man to make money so he can support aunt may, while ochako reason is kins of sifferemt) not trying to force anything BTW. this story's writing has the potential to surpass the other mha x spiderman fics I read. Keep it up!

CatalysVesp

Awesome! And I just thought of the perfect code name for peter and ochako duo name definitely will be "The Dyanmic Brokies" (again not trying to force you into putting this idea into the story I'm trying to be funny please! )
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MikesCrackFics

THANK YOU!! Yeah, most fics nowadays tend to portray Peter as a golden child who’s immediately perfect. I kinda wanted to run it back to a more nuanced take on the character taking stuff from the original Lee-Ditko era and modern takes. I think the best way to write Peter is him being flawed but not irredeemably awful. Like most of his arrogance and most of him being an unapologetic prick comes as Spider-Man, while Peter is a more reserved somewhat friendly guy who still has his frustrations and selfishness to an extent. As for him and Ochako I definitely do plan on them having a lot of interactions because I definitely think they’d have a very interesting dynamic and as you pointed out, they do share similarities. As for potential ships, I’m not decided yet. I legitimately think any of the girls from 1-A would work perfectly with him in some way
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