319986d
What is the name of your other account? Can you give me access to it?
Milestro
319986d
Are you still using this account? And are you still making stories on it?
Splatmaster420
dude where are you?
Milestro
@Splatmaster420 I have been working on my new projects on my other account under my pen name. Here is the link: https://www.wattpad.com/user/BradWolfe50
readingonceandagain
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smolldino1019
so you changed the picture title for the story @Milestro
wweWrestleMania34kid
Hi There @Milestro
Iamcool34456478
Hey your Cerberus fanfic is awesome. I wonder if your other stories are cool too
wweWrestleManiakid40
Hi there @Milestro
RedAlphaWolf1
can you read my stories? the first is: sword of darkness.
https://www.wattpad.com/story/321545333-sword-of-darkness
the second in the darkness series is: the darkness within.
https://www.wattpad.com/story/337117379-the-darkess-within
the final is yet to be produced.
Milestro
@RedAlphaWolf1 Here is my thought. Most people want stories written in prose because prose are immensive. When you read prose, you are able to visualize the story in your own mind, without being limited by the specific shots and angles that would be used in a film or television adaptation. This can lead to a more personal and engaging reading experience. It is also flexable and allows more character development. I couldn't visualize what is happening in your story, especially in large paragraphs. I suggest you shorten the paragraphs and don't use shot and location headings. Use specific details and show, don't tell. Hopefully my suggestion will help.
RedAlphaWolf1
Everyone and their friend is saying that (The story is fine, but I didn't like the script format. It probably be better written in a novel style narrative.) but NO-ONE is taking time to explain what they are meaning. Can you explain what you and my entire reading community means?
RedAlphaWolf1
question: what did you think of the story over all? please elaborate.
Note: I tried to work on darkness within and had NO luck and I deleted it in favor of another idea I had for another sequel.
319986d
I have a question because I’m really confused. You gave it an epilogue But when I checked it’s title when I tapped it on my phone it said ongoing instead of complete. I want to know is it really done or is their still more? And if it’s really done the. Can you make it say complete so that I won’t get confused?