hi, i really loved your bio im glad your confident and not afraid to say what you feel about something. Thats wht critiquing is others just have to learn to see the good in what u are saying and then try and revise it if they wish to see if they like it or not. BTW have you watched the series Bleach? I personally think its a good how and there are two movies as well they are ok in my opinion tho. I hope you keep up writing you really good at it! :) :) :)
Also in sorry this is a long message and i have a question if you dont mind. Im watching Soul Eater on netflix do you know of another site i could watch more on if there are more seasons?