@MillaMaynard
Chapter 1 has been rewritten. The sentence structures and wordings have all been revised. Hopefully this makes the beginning smoother and not as compact. The word count has also slimmed down and the final scene has been extended with more dialogue.
Chapter nine, Saturnine, is out!
Eighth chapter is out!
Seventh chapter is out, let me know what you think.
I loved it!! The way you write the fighting is very clear and easy to imagine. And the dynamic between Vespera and Xanth is very nice ;)
Updated Cover for Veil of Ash! Take a look ^
Chapter Five of Veil of Ash is out! Sorry for my inactivity. - M
Hello. I’ve been jumping from draft to draft for the past years. Guess what though, I finally found the story that sits well with me. So today, I published the first chapter of Veil of Ash. I have three chapters written for now, so I’ll be posting one a day for next three days. Planning the fourth chapter now! Comments are highly appreciated! Negative or positive ones! Likes are also encouraged! Thanks. - M
