MillaMaynard

Chapter 1 has been rewritten. The sentence structures and wordings have all been revised. Hopefully this makes the beginning smoother and not as compact. The word count has also slimmed down and the final scene has been extended with more dialogue. 

Trisha385544

When it comes to writing you can actually read a lot of plost with different Author but with similarly same style of story with different twist of ideas to add I also see this in another fanfiction story. 
          Like the Ash Pokemon Journey who have the same thing going with different styles of Author writing it 

MillaMaynard

Chapter 1 has been rewritten. The sentence structures and wordings have all been revised. Hopefully this makes the beginning smoother and not as compact. The word count has also slimmed down and the final scene has been extended with more dialogue. 

MillaMaynard

Seventh chapter is out, let me know what you think.

MillaMaynard

Thank you! Glad you came back to reading :3
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KawaiiFoxyWolf

I loved it!! The way you write the fighting is very clear and easy to imagine. And the dynamic between Vespera and Xanth is very nice ;)
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MillaMaynard

Hello. I’ve been jumping from draft to draft for the past years. Guess what though, I finally found the story that sits well with me. So today, I published the first chapter of Veil of Ash. I have three chapters written for now, so I’ll be posting one a day for next three days. Planning the fourth chapter now! Comments are highly appreciated! Negative or positive ones! Likes are also encouraged! Thanks. - M