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Thanks for the critique I really really appreciate it!

@KeetaPeeta13 Thanks for the suggestions! I'll be picking a new title in three days :)

I think some cool titles would be Don't Deny the List, Waiting for Answers, "D".  I personally like "D" the best because its short, catchy, and a big symbol of the story, also check out this awesome pick for a new cover.https://www.google.com/search?hl=en&client=safari&tbo=d&biw=1024&bih=672&tbm=isch&oq=the+letter+d+in+creepy+font+&gs_l=img.3...23115.24624.0.26096.7.7.0.0.0.0.256.847.3j3j1.7.0...0.0...1ac.1.5F0NSm8-3M8&q=the%20letter%20d%20in%20creepy%20font#biv=i|17;d|xnGvQL8w3RoKGM:

@AnderaGNovak I am :) Thanks for the suggestion! I'll keep it in mind, and let you know by February which title I'll be choosing :D

I don't know if you are still looking for a title or not, but I think "Reaper" may be a cool title for "Why?" but it depends I guess.

Hey thanks for reviewing my One-Shot!  

@LeeWenYi Thanks for your input :)
          It strikes me as quite a good idea, and I'll consider it :)

@Freebreeze @Millilitre Sorry for intruding:p "Dustborn" would probably be a good title, but you can also keep 'Why?' and use the others like "Destined for the truth" and "never question society" as some pretty cool subtitles:)