MimiLine

Hi everyone! Kakapost ko lang ng bagong storyko na Wonderwall. I hope you'll like it :) 

AbsolutelyAstranger

@MimiLine  nabasa ko yung Wonderwall mo, sobrang galing mo. Pero ba't ang tagal mong nawala Mimiline? Sayang yung S.U mo di pa tapos e.
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Havenic

Hi bhie. Gusto ko lang sana'ng sabihin na ang ganda ng Wonderwall. Ang galing ng pag-pili mo ng title kasi siya yung tipo na, mapapalagay ka talaga sa library. Maski ang mga pag-execute mo ng mga galaw nila. Interesting  siya ah  There's just one thing. I'm no magaling but suggestion ko lang sana sayo. Nahahalata ko kasi na sa bawat end ng dialogue mo ay hindi mo nalalagyan ng  period o comma. Friendly advice lang katulad nito. 
          
          "Matigil ka nga diyan Mikael," asik ko sakanya. 
          
          Oh diba? Parang mas kumpleto siya tingnan. Yun lang naman kasi over-all, maganda na siya. Sana wag 'kang magalit, huhu. I'm looking forward sa storyy mo. God bless always. c:
          
          

MimiLine

@Havenic  well salamat sa suggestion mo, Im glad napansin mo yun. Iimprove ko talaga yun kasi di naman talaga ako professional writer. Salamat sa pagsupporta ng Wonderwall! :) 
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zoyajin

Hi! I love your story Sherlock Academy so much, but I think that story is On-Hold. But still I really love it. ♡ 

zoyajin

@LadySicachuu Aw, it will be deleted? Sayang naman. pero that's okay you'll make a new story naman diba? so i'm looking forward to it again. 
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MimiLine

@LadySicachuu Yes. Sherlock is still Onhold cause I've been thinking that I'll make a new story and also I'm sad to say this that  maybe I'll delete it cause the chapters that I made were accidentally deleted.. So, Thanks a lot for loving Sherlock eventhough it will be deleted. :D 
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