Mimi

@EffIt_XD 
          Hahaha! That will teach you to always kiss the frog before you hack it to pieces!

@brainlikeadrain nah its okay, just like one song of Muse. Enjoy your scribbling I should get to bed Peace

Ah okay. As a rule I'm not a metal/emo fan so not familiar with A7F or BB. But just happen to love MCR. MUSE are more my thing.
          
          Right I'd better get some scribbling done. Good talking to you, and speak again soon.

@brainlikeadrain I like them but I'm more into avenged sevenfold and breaking benjamin

MCR - My Chemical Romance. Thought you might be a fan.

@brainlikeadrain thank I'll keep it in mind and about the emo...well let's just say I have a long history with SI X_x
          Fan what?

Hi EmoBunny,
          
          Firstly your writing does not suck, but maybe it just needs structure - I would advise thinking about the basics of beginning, middle and end with a twist. It's good you can use writing as an outlet for some obviously powerful emotions. I think given time you can channel this into some very thought-provoking writing.
          
          Keep at it.
          
          P.S. Emo? MCR Fan?