MimixD

If you have the­ time could you please check o­ut my story, its my first one ­and its not finished but I wou­ld like some feedback, I'd jus­t like to get a few responses ­on how people think its going,­ and get a little more popular. 
          If you can't it­s no problem :) 
          Here is a link in case:
          http://www.wattpad.com/368564-chapter-1-him
          Thanks for your time :)

@inix33: ;D I know riteeee.