Can anyone that has read this give me some form of critism? This is not rocket scinece. Just tell me if it is good or not and what works and what doesnt.
Peons, read and tell me if its bad or not. Also, is there a better place to post this? I don't really like wattpad. Very transactional. Or dont read. I don's care
@aetherthron4013 to be honest im not looking for numbers, so much as I am looking for proper critique. Thank you but unless you want to review my stuff, I won't review yours. Thank you, however, for stopping by