MinoanCvprvm
I bet you peons did not expect a Christmas chapter
MinoanCvprvm
MinoanCvprvm
Eye I Aye
Have written some more
Just suck the marrow from the bone
MinoanCvprvm
New part. read
MinoanCvprvm
what do you think?
MinoanCvprvm
Mayhaps more today
MinoanCvprvm
I did it
I have finally done it
I did it
I actually did it
MinoanCvprvm
I cannot make dreams
MinoanCvprvm
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alright, new shit, same shit. Out
breannabennett301bcb
Thank you for voting
MinoanCvprvm
@breannabennett301bcb These kinds of stories are not what I seek out, I like horror and crime stuff but I will say your dialogue feels much more realistic. It sounds like contemporary speech and the crass nature fits it very well. It also is a lot easier to settle into the plot than other stories. The humor is standout, too. I'll re-read the rest of it to see if i can help, but you are solid!
MinoanCvprvm
The scheduling didn't work so two parts today, one tomorrow.
They suck.
But they are good for the future. Will update when everything is finished