Minslotus
Guys I can’t w books when they repeat the exact same thing in the following five chapters T-T like you could at least try and word it a little differently yk so it doesn’t feel repetitive even tho it is. It made me quit the book bec there was no actual progress and the same dialogue kept repeating over and over. Which is such a shame tbh bec it was written well layout wise and stuff just not conversation wise. It was a good plot to write about as well but to my personal opinion it was done poorly. No hate towards the author at all!! It had so much potential and I really liked it in the beginning of the book:(
writerrs2
I wonder to this day if their eyes were made of glass or something since light was reflecting on it, repeatedly
writerrs2
basically for example “his eyes shined with mischief, hands loosening on her waist. She glanced up at him, eyes shining” or something like that and the eyes kept shining so much I started worying one would turn blind if they look into the protagonist’s eyes.
writerrs2
I have never really cared too much, if peoples writing was repetitive or more simple. But, one time on a story- it got so bad I genuinely started laughing and counting how many times I saw the same sentence. The sentence was there multiple times, every single chapter, sometimes even in the same paragraph . I still read the entire story and liked it. but it did bother me a bit that I couldn’t remember much, because my entire focus was on that one sentence…es? I would love to tell you what the sentence was but I seriously can’t remember much. I think it might of been something with the eye? Like the eye shined with a emotion or something or maybe darkened? I just remember it was something with the eye.
