Minti_leaf
I hope the people that read my MDZS fanfic see this, cus this is for you homies.
OKAY. Just looking for some feedback to improve the rewrite of Self-Sacrificing Elder Sister.
1: Should I change Hua Daiyu's name? I picked it at random, and aren't too attached, plus I think it's boring. If I did change it, would yall have suggestions?
2: Is there anything you'd like me to change about my writing? Such as, things you feel are missing, wanting me to elaborate on stuff before moving on, or even just how I frame the writing.
3: Would you like me to add pictures? This would be done either to add ambiance or visualize certain things. Would likely be put in at the start of a chapter, so as to not interrupt the passages.
That's all for now! If you have any other questions or suggestions, please feel free to either comment here or PM me! ^^
Blue3___M00n
@Minti_leaf Oh I would love to see more of the siblings interact especially Yanli (since their both females) or Wuxian (since she found him first and took care of him and seems to be a BIG part of his life) but JC also needs some love (maybe work on MC and JC's relationship since they didn't really seem to have much interaction even tho they grew up together and are adopted siblings) Hope this helps (°▽°)
SweetieZeria
@ Minti_leaf It is my pleasure! If you need any help in the future let me know I am glad to help .
I went on a whole google search for the perfect names .
Minti_leaf
@SweetieZeria Thank you so much! This is a huge help and I appreciate the feedback! (Especially on the name ;)) It's also a funny coincidence that most of the suggestions on my writing were things I was going to do! I think the changes will make the story much smoother and pleasing to read. Once again, I really appreciate the feedback! ^^